Petition asks Dylan Neal to read prison screenplay

More than 2000 women sign petition demanding a firm commitment from  Dylan Neal (film producer) to read screenplay addressing Texas judicial system

Dylan Neal asked to read prison screenplay

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– Actor, Writer, Producer – Fifty Shades of Grey (2015), Fifty Shades Freed (2018), Cedar Cove (2013), Arrow (2012) – Play Management, Lena Lees – Authentic Talent and Literary Management

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Dylan Neal & Adam Sandler’s film company targeted by Texas petition

Will Hollywood just rollover and let prisoner’s suffer?


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More than 2000 women have signed an open letter to Adam Sandler calling on Dylan Neal and Hollywood to take “movie action” to tackle injustice against men and women in the wake of revelations that Texas has more prisoners incarcerated than the Soviet Union’s gulag system had. Texas currently has over 290,000 inmates housed at 580 facilities.

The signatories, including state senators, professors of criminal justice, social workers, family, and inmates, call for a “firm commitment” to tackle the unjust prisons in Texas. The petition has also been signed by Beto O’Rourke, and Matthew McConaughey. These two signatories might face each other in the 2022 Texas governors election. Both have expressed interest in the job.  The petitions arrived for Dylan Neal at Play Management, Lena Lees last week.

In the open letter to Dylan Neal, the 2080 women write that they are “heartbroken for first-time drug offenders many times addicts who have received extremely harsh sentences in Texas when rehabilitation has proven a cheaper and more effective solution.”  The petition goes on to say their family and friends are often heartbroken for and looking for redemption and rehabilitation for the victimless drug crimes.”

The signatories, including attorneys, professors, politicians, family members, and inmates, call on Dylan Neal for a ‘firm film commitment’ to tackle the issue of operating the Texas prison system for profit.

The petition came to light when women discovered the screenplay, a copy which was dontated to all 580 of the state’s prison and jail libraries. The existence of the petition surfaced on International Women’s Day. Women in Texas face extreme prejudice in Texas and often receive extremely harsh penalties for even a small amount of drugs, including marijuana. Marijuana is legal now in 21 states.

Inside prisons, the women are faced with such horrendous conditions… the petition demands that “filmmakers begin to take the issue seriously.”  Also, the petition reminds that “even here in the USA in the 21st century citizens are not safe from government oppression.”

Actor, Writer, Producer, Dylan Neal, has not responded to the petition. Nor has Play Management, Lena Lees responded with a comment.

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The screenplayDumbass” was penned by writer and retired professor of political science Alan Nafzger.

The premise of the story is that,Adam Sandler writes letters and saves numerous women from the monotony of prison life, and later when he gets into trouble with a drug cartel they return the favor by rescuing him.”

The film would be set in contemporary, Gatesville Texas. There are four women’s prisons located in Gatesville. And of course, Texas is famous for putting everyone in prison for a long sentences for little or no reason. The number of women in Texas prisons has tripled in the last ten years, as mass incarcerations have proven profitable to not only the state but also profitable for an array of business interests.

Writer Alan Nafzger has called on Governor Greg Abbott to, “end the prison industry.”

Recently, “Wheel of Fortune” host Pat Sajak spoke out against the Texas system and put a good word in for mercy and forgiveness out on social media. “How nice for those who have lived such exemplary lives that they can express glee when others have their lives ruined by a mistake, real or perceived,” Sajak tweeted last month.

During the winter’s deep freeze, the The Marshall Project, exposed the horrible prison conditions, “Inside Frigid Texas Prisons: Broken Toilets, Disgusting Food, Few Blankets.”

The petition states, “Why don’t we have the ‘Adam Sandler’ character… sending letters to women in prison and being their friend and trying to help them adjust, giving them hope… and when they get out of prison he picks them up so they don’t have to ride the smelly bus back home… but his pickup truck is a junker, smoking and sputtering … worse than the bus. But his heart is in the right place… He’s the last “chivalrous” man on earth.”

Dylan Neal has not commented on the script, thus far. A statement is expected soon.

Professor Nafzger has made a short treatment of the project available online.

He has made the finished script available at for select filmmakers.

Adam Sandler of Happy Madison Productions has expressed interest in the screenplay.

Dylan Neal is a Actor, Writer, Producer known for Fifty Shades of Grey (2015), Fifty Shades Freed (2018), Cedar Cove (2013), Arrow (2012) and is represented by Play Management, Lena Lees.

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Every scene in the entire screenplay should have a transition. Failure to add them will stand out mostly in Act II because of the length of this Act compared to Act I and Act III. Transitions are how one scene ends and another begins. A phone might ring in one house, then the next scene opens with someone answering the phone in another house. This creates a visual to visual transition that creates a moving picture in the reader’s mind. Transitions can be visual or dialogue and be used in any combination to create a transition. A character might say he’d never fly in a plane (dialogue), then the next scene opens with him flying in a plane (visual). This type of style provides a moving picture, a transition, plus a bonus reversal. That’s how the pros do it!


Every scene in Act II must contribute to the hero’s arc and should have a dialogue and/or a visual reversal. If these two areas are not covered in a scene, then edit the scene or delete it. A reversal is nothing more than a mini-twist. Aspiring writers make the mistake of only writing a big twist for the plot points, but pros know every scene requires a mini-twist to make a story work. Other writers follow the ‘every 10 pages rule’, where a reversal takes place every ten pages. This is okay, but I guarantee the pros have it in every scene! These reversals can be subtle and small, but they must be there. If we’re expecting a character to leave via the front door, have him leave via the back door (visual reversal). A character says I love you to one character have the other character say “I hate you too” (dialogue reversal). These mini-reversals keep material fresh because they keep the reader (audience) guessing.


Now, try it with your own story!